A young tabby furtively enters the alley. She shies away from the dumpster's visible fumes. She sees the green eyes, and hesitates before asking, "Are you Merlin?"
"Call me what you will," he shrugged. "What do you wish of me?" Cats from all over the city had come to see him about one thing or another. It seemed as though each one had a different name for him. Like humans, cats picked whatever name seemed to fit the feline they were addressing.
"I-I want a tom... one that will stay with me... that won't leave when I am pregnant."
"You ask for a tom to go against his nature. To be something he is not."
"I know it sounds preposterous, but..."
"I will not do that to a tom."
The tabby hung her head. "There is nothing you can do then?"
"No. I can, but I won't. You have to find your own way."
"What way?"
"That is for you to discover."
"You won't tell me?"
"Information told is information forgotten. Information learned is a lesson kept and remembered."
The tabby sat and watched him for a long time. Finally, she rose and left the alley.
The black cat, sometimes called Merlin, also left the alley, licking his forepaw as he levitated up onto the roof of the apartment building where he lived. When he landed, he entered a small cat door at the bottom the roof access door, and descended the stairs to his small apartment.
He passed through the main room which felt much smaller than it was, due to all the clutter. He stepped lightly over books and papers and around a large chemistry set that took up a quarter of the room. Merlin had learned many things from his human, including the levitation trick he had just performed.
"Ah, there you are, my furry friend. Been watching the pigeons again, have you?" said the old white-bearded man, emerging from the kitchen.
Merlin rubbed against his leg and purred.
"I have a surprise for you." The old man picked up his cat and took him to a kitchen so small it was more of a closet than a kitchen. He set Merlin down at his food dish. Merlin growled. There was another cat there, eating his food. The female tabby lifted her head and grinned.
"I heard her meowing outside. The poor thing is half starved. She'll make a wonderful companion for you," said the old man, walking out the door. "It will be nice to have kittens in the house again," he mused from the other room.
The two cats stared at each other. Merlin growled again. He wanted to pummel this queen. Kittens indeed! Not if he had anything to say about it!
The tabby continued to look smug. "You told me to solve my own problem. What better way to get what I want than to be adopted by a human with a tom?" she purred.
"How did you know the old man would take you in?"
"Cats are known the world over as watchers."
"How did you get in here before I did?"
"You're the magician. You tell me," she purred and rubbed up against him.
He wanted to hiss and strike out at her, but as she rubbed up against him, a wild and forgotten instinct roared within him. It was pleasant... She was getting what she wanted from him! He shot out of the room, up the stairs and out his cat door. He sat on the roof, gasping for breath. He heard a clearing of the throat beside him. It was the tabby. "How?"
She purred, "I have my own secrets."
"Why me?"
"You are unique. You left the choice to me. Very generous for a tomcat. Besides, you did say there was something you could do."
"Who are you?"
"You may call me Hera."
His green eyes widened. He knew that name. Like him, she had many others, but this one suited her best. He shuddered. "And I am your Zeus," he said dully.
She purred.
Elizabeth Williamson Copyright © 2008
7 comments:
This was a nice little trip through the experiences in the life of a cat. The magic aspect was an unexpected treat too. A fun really fun story! This has potential for being a much longer story.
Your story really got me thinking, so apologies for all my thoughts. Good stories always pull me in and raise questions that I have to know the answers to. So please take the following as a compliment:
"Perhaps. I have many names."
Why 'perhaps', why not just tell her his name, why dodge it? And why so many names? You don't elaborate.
I wish there were more insight into their surroundings. It's not vital to the story, but knowing a bit about their world gives the reader a larger picture of their experience without spelling it all out.
Why is her idea of having a spouse 'forbidden'. And in spite of it being forbidden, Merlin declares there is a way-- and she has to figure it out for herself. I'm confused.
Is the whole apartment small? Is that why the kitchen is so small? (see my 1st comment about setting.)
Good stuff Beth! Thanks so much for posting.
This blog of yours is really getting me back into a writing frame of mind, and forcing me to rethink writing and it's disciplines. I hope my comments are helping you.
forbidden because tom cats aren't like humans. they don't stick around for the pregnancy and birth and raising of the kittens. no tom does that. anyone who knows cats knows that. to change someone's essence of character by force is what's really forbidden. however there was a way for her to get as close to what she wants as she can. and that is what she did. she became the pet of a human who had a tom cat. so unless he runs away from his comfortable home he's stuck with her.
i added a few details with the other stuff you mentioned. i hope it's better. thanks for the comments
I understand about toms (though I'm not a cat expert by any stretch of the imagination). I just thought it odd that Merlin makes it sound like the Toms life and hopes for happiness would be obliterated ('destroyed' was your word), that it was forbidden (which sounds like impossible to me: that to do so, would make her an outcast in cat society, or would kill the tom, etc.). He just makes it sound so dire as to be a non-option, as opposed to a challenge of immense difficulty. In any case, you get my meaning.
I'll have to read it again, before I can cast my thoughts back to you. Talk to you later.
A cat story. Figures. At any rate, I think it's pretty good. Interesting point of view.
I think 'perhaps' is O.K., it adds to the general idea the story is trying to get across. Goes with the weird idea of 'forbidden.'
Since it's talking cats, maybe a cat is telling the story, mostly interested in the kitchen, but a cat may have favorite cat spots. Now, what would you know on that subject, not really knowing an indoor cat? Maybe you are out of your territory! HA!
M
oh yeah? the outdoor cats have favorite spots too. it's a cat i know how it works bleh!
Chuckle!
M
Ahhh! That's better.
Why didn't you tell me you changed it. This is a much better end to a fantastical story.
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