Love the second stanza. Makes me feel happy... which I suspect was the whole purpose. Way to go.
In the first stanza "Contagious as a plague" throws me into a funk. Somehow the word plague throws me out of the happy mood and into AHHHH! mode. Not sure why that is, but there you go.
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Love the second stanza. Makes me feel happy... which I suspect was the whole purpose. Way to go.
In the first stanza "Contagious as a plague" throws me into a funk. Somehow the word plague throws me out of the happy mood and into AHHHH! mode. Not sure why that is, but there you go.
i fixed it. better?
Ahhhh! Goodness is back. Thanks!
So much better.
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