Sunday, November 8, 2009

Limerick Attempt #1



Back to School
A werewolf, a witch and a ghoul,
Decided they’d go back to school;
When met at the door with a blade,
A pitchfork, a torch, and a spade,
They decided they’d rather play pool.

Back to School: A Limerick
By Ken Chandler
Copyright © 2009

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

lines 1, 2 and 5 generally have the same number of syllables. and lines 3 and 4 have the same number, but less than the others.

amusing. like a limerick should be. good job.

Ken Chandler said...

Thanks. I wasn't aware, apparently. I'll see if I can fix it. It may never change-- in which case I apologize. No, not really. : )

Anonymous said...

Tempo off. Yep.